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#1  [原创] 实践一下等字数翻译

Red plum tree blooms on red cliff
Miles of snow and ice under feet
Coldest winter is nothing to fear
She opens her heart towards the sun
Blooming are the red red plum flowers
Each petal shines in a glaring glow
Tens of thousands there on the high
Their fragrance spreads up to the sky
Waking up other flowers to bloom also
She sings soprano to usher in spring

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中文。https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ruscIkGnwwg

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Red plum blooms on red cliffy seat
Miles of snow’nd ice under her feet
Coldest winter is nothing to fear about
Towards the sun the red petals sprout
Blooming flowers form a restless red flow
Showers of blossoms shine in glaring glow
Tens of thousands there on the high
Their fragrance spreads up to the sky
Waking up other flowers to bloom also
To usher in spring she sings soprano


2018-4-2 10:11
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