少女慈禧
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巾幗歷次勝男兒 男女代代對峙
曾否推測過明天舉世 重由弱質再把持
傾國事跡數褒姒 臨政唐朝武氏
問兩者相比較何所似 男兒盡忠難變志

* 曾記否幾許往事 鳳居高處玉龍失意
坐在簾後細把鳳聲轉 屠龍正是她下旨
可笑是八尺昂藏 朝聖論盡國事
或者當初也曾經想過 潺潺弱質難展翅 *

大概意译：

Against each other for years and years, women are always better than men.

Had you ever speculated about that tomorrow the world would be under controlled by a weak woman?

The Pao Si's stories of the kingdom caused a sensation just like Madam Wu  governing the Tang Dynasty .

Let me ask you, what is the difference between the two?  People in those years were so loyal to their queens.

Do you remember things happened in the past?  The phoenix sat so high frustrating the jade dragon a lot.

Sitting behind the curtain she passed her messages in detail.  Killing the dragon was her imperial order...

南鄉子    一剑封喉

暴雨怒通宵，秋晚狂風卷飄搖。 洗尽人间世俗尘， 蕭蕭。 劣跡斑斑亦全消。

我劍要出鞘，鬼魅魍魎無處逃。 天地正氣攔不住， 滔滔。 一把龍淵斬魔妖。


Heavily it rains throughout the night,
the crazy autumn winds blow so high.
Rain washes all dust off everything,
while winds are constantly howling.
All bad stains are being bleached,
I pull out my sword from the sheath:
all devils have nowhere to run away,
nothing can block the righteous way.
Into the mighty sky justice has soared,
Evils are chopped by my Longyuan sword.

Nov.25， 2015

谢谢小草君对最后两句的调整！

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連中文都有錯: 曾否推測過明天舉世  重由弱質再把持
應該是"曾否推測過明天  舉世重由弱質再把持"

英文更爛: Had you ever speculated about that tomorrow the world would be under controlled by a weak woman?
that 從句前不需要用about。
under controlled 絕對的語法錯誤。要麼 under control。要麼 controlled。
其他我就沒有時間了批評你了。還有錯誤是可以想像的。

我贴孑不欢迎你，谢谢！

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