《相見歡》(擬古小詞)

凝眸獨立斜暉﹐柳依依。望斷春江﹐不見斯人歸。     
玉容悴﹐寸心碎﹐訴誰知。寂寞春閨﹐幾度淚沾衣。

Gazing while standing alone in the slanting sunlight
The willow twigs swaying
Watching to where the river in Spring no longer seen
The person expected not coming back into my sight yet

The face languishing
The heart broken
And whom to tell?
In the lonely boudoir
How many times the tears wet the dress

Enjoy reading both versions.

Watching to where the river in Spring no longer seen
spring: lower case shall be fine?

thanks.   names of seasons often used in lower case.