这个是新奥尔良印象。Adagio批评过的，想想改不好，不改了。

Notes from the Crescent City

Under the honey-dipped moon
The city is brewing up a storm
Like a voodoo queen’s pot
Bubbling with excitement
With anticipation

I am but one of the ingredients
A sacrificed fish, suffocated
Gasping for the moist air

All things are mixed together

Milk chocolate skins and cellulite-free bodies mixed
With tourists’ pale paunches

Proud flags of Star - Spangled Banner mixed
With proud flags of rainbow

Smells of sweats and perfumes
Cigarettes and weeds
Garbage and sewage

All mixed up together
In this giant bowl of Gumbo

I like last two verses best )

"Under the honey-dipped moon
The city is brewing up a storm
Like a voodoo queen’s pot
Bubbling with excitement
With anticipation"

like that, can feel the tension...

did I? oh boy, can't even remember. read again and feel it's not glued together as a whole piece. maybe I felt same thing earlier. Like your Chicago very much though, IMO it's your best poem.