标题: 怀旧 NOSTALGIA [打印本页]
作者: 非马 时间: 2008-7-9 11:23 标题: 怀旧 NOSTALGIA
怀旧
西出阳关无故人
更何况绕了大半个地球
今夜的天空
挤满了
大大小小的人造卫星
却没有一个
载得起
我要给你的信息
NOSTALGIA
It's said there'll be no old friends
west of Yang Gate
I am now more than half the world away
tonight's sky is crowded
with man-made satellites
big and small
but I can't find even one
that can carry my messages
to you
作者: fanghuzhai 时间: 2008-7-9 18:23
It's said that no acquaintances
to the west of the border gate Yang Guan
此句有语法问题?
作者: 非马 时间: 2008-7-10 14:53
Originally posted by fanghuzhai at 2008-7-9 11:23 PM:
It's said that no acquaintances
to the west of the border gate Yang Guan
此句有语法问题?
谢谢 fanghuzhai 的质疑. 另一个论坛也有人对这两行提出意见,虽然是从不同的角度.我把它们改成了:
It's said there'll be no old friends
west of Yang Gate
作者: 小忍 时间: 2008-7-12 13:47
In the last sentence of the English version, could the 2nd "can" be changed to "may" so that 1) avoiding redundance; 2) 更接近英语的习惯?
Originally posted by 非马 at 2008-7-9 04:23 PM:
but I can't find even one
that can carry my messages
to you
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