1
The drenched
vacation
turns languorously
in the stuffy
hotel room
2
Outside the window
the slanting poles
of rain
are fishing in the cold waves
for the lost
spring
3
Once something reminds me
that winter here is cold
and damp
every joint
of my memory
starts aching
Published in PEGASUS,Spring/Summer Issue 1997作者: zhuxiaodi 时间: 2007-11-17 15:31 Good poem. I like it a lot. It works in both languages, except that "hotel" should be "motel" and "staffy" is a different image from the Chinese one. Try with something else. It could be better.作者: 冰花 时间: 2007-11-17 16:07 喜欢这首,很有味道~~作者: 如梦 时间: 2007-11-17 22:13 每个记忆的关节
都在
隐隐作痛
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