标题: （古诗英绎）《胡笳十八拍》（第九节） [打印本页]
作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-12 19:27 标题: （古诗英绎）《胡笳十八拍》（第九节）
《胡笳十八拍》（第九节）
天無涯兮地無邊，
我心愁兮亦復然。
人生倏忽兮如白駒之過隙，
然不得歡樂兮當我之盛年。
怨兮欲問天，
天蒼蒼兮上無緣。
舉頭仰望兮空雲煙，
九拍懷情兮誰與傳？
The Nineth Song
The heaven is endless, the earth boundless,
My heart drowneth in the ceaseless sadness.
Oh, life fadeth as fast as a white horse leapeth a crack,
Still in my prime, I've been bereft of bliss, alack!
So ireful, I must ask heaven,
Alas, He is too far to me hearken.
Lo, I see no heaven but cloudy smoke
Oh, whom could this ninth song’s grief invoke?
Tr. Xiao Cao
作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-9-12 20:14
beautiful！love it
the third line is my favourite in this stanza. I enjoyed all your works.
作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-12 21:56
Originally posted by Xiaoman at 2016-9-13 01:14 AM:
beautiful！love it
the third line is my favourite in this stanza. I enjoyed all your works.
Thank you for your encouragement! 
I heartily welcome any constructive criticism.
作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-13 03:38
Originally posted by Xiaoman at 2016-9-13 01:14 AM:
beautiful！love it
the third line is my favourite in this stanza. I enjoyed all your works.
I revised my fourth line, please tell me if it is much better than the maiden version or not? Many thanks in advance. 
作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-13 04:01
Revised it again, hmm, I deem it is better though it still has a lot to be desired...
作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-9-13 21:53
haha! Little Grass, you are such a perfectionist.
作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-13 23:55
Originally posted by
Xiaoman at 2016-9-14 02:53 AM:
haha!
Little Grass, you are such a perfectionist.
Hahaha, well, I would say I am trying to be ....hahaha,
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