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标题: [原创] 老方译诗：致希利亚 [打印本页]

作者: fanghuzhai 时间: 2015-4-15 16:02 标题: [原创] 老方译诗：致希利亚

TO CELIA.

   B. JONSON.

   Drink to me only with thine eyes,
   And I will pledge with mine;
   Or leave a kiss but in the cup
   And I'll not look for wine.
   The thirst that from the soul doth rise
   Doth ask a drink divine;
   But might I of Jove's nectar sup,
   I would not change for thine.

与希利亚书

张本

请君以目与我饮，我亦回望示情贞。
或将一吻留于杯。美酒佳酿不他寻。
灵魂深处有渴望，满足唯赖仙琼浆。
爱神送来琼浆液，怎及爱人情意长。

   I sent thee late a rosy wreath,
   Not so much honouring thee
   As giving it a hope that there
   It could not wither'd be;
   But thou thereon didst only breathe
   And sent'st it back to me;
   Since when it grows, and smells, I swear,
   Not of itself but thee!

玫瑰花环将来晚*，非为荣耀君容颜。
只盼悉心来守护，花鲜永驻不凋残。
君见花环仅闻香，旋即又把花送还。
此后花开有异香，敢谓来自君身边！

* 原文的late，很可能是“最近”的意思。那就要改成“吾今送君玫瑰环”

作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-4-26 07:13
方教授好译！

I give it a try:

Drink to me only with thine eyes,
      And I will pledge with mine;
   Or leave a kiss but in the cup
      And I'll not look for wine.
   The thirst that from the soul doth rise
      Doth ask a drink divine;
   But might I of Jove's nectar sup,
      I would not change for thine.

请用眼神与我对饮
我将深情回敬良久
或在杯中留一个吻
而我寻找的不是酒
索取一杯甘露玉液
是灵魂升起的渴求
爱神送来琼浆蜜汁
比不上你爱意长留

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