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标题: 英诗汉译：牧羊小子求婚曲 [打印本页]
作者: fanghuzhai     时间: 2015-3-23 22:12     标题: 英诗汉译：牧羊小子求婚曲

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The Passionate Shepherd to His Love
Christopher Marlowe

Come live with me and be my love,
And we will all the pleasures prove
That valleys, groves, hills, and fields,
Woods, or steepy mountain yields.

做我爱妻同我栖，恩恩爱爱乐无比。田野山谷和树林，无不因此而欢喜。

And we will sit upon the rocks,
Seeing the shepherds feed their flocks,
By shallow rivers to whose falls
Melodious birds sing madrigals.

与你同坐岩石上，看着牧童去放羊。河流清浅瀑布下，良禽美鸟齐歌唱。

And I will make thee beds of roses
And a thousand fragrant posies,
A cap of flowers, and a kirtle
Embroidered all with leaves of myrtle;

卧榻为你玫瑰铺，万千花朵清香扑。头戴一顶美花冠，长裙绣得叶扶疏。

A gown made of the finest wool
Which from our pretty lambs we pull;
Fair lined slippers for the cold,
With buckles of the purest gold;

为你织就羊毛裙，羊毛出自美羊身。精巧鞋只御寒冷，鞋扣闪闪是真金。

A belt of straw and ivy buds,
With coral clasps and amber studs:
And if these pleasures may thee move,
Come live with me, and be my love.

腰系草带花春藤，珊瑚为扣琥珀钉。卿若因此真情动，做我爱妻伴一生。

The shepherds’ swains shall dance and sing
For thy delight each May morning:
If these delights thy mind may move,
Then live with me and be my love.

牧羊小子歌且舞，五月春晨亦乐乎。卿若因此真情动，做我爱人来我屋。

这里还有一节：

http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/Guides3/PassionateShepherd.html


Thy silver dishes for thy meat  
As precious as the gods do eat,  
Shall on an ivory table be  
Prepared each day for thee and me.
银盘盛来肉味香
佳肴曾是神仙尝
象牙餐桌摆美宴
夫妻举案永日长
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作者: 忍忍     时间: 2015-3-24 07:19
牧羊小女求婚曲：

爱我就娶我。

哈哈， 开个玩笑！

另， 不给原文怎可读翻译？可查，不方便。
作者: 忍忍     时间: 2015-3-28 08:43
谢了。this is much better。

这首通俗，没有新观点。亮点是方老师把 shepherd 翻成个牧羊小子, but the entire poem, does not indicate it is young or old, female or male speech (short of the title), had it been a 牧羊老妇人, it would be a real joke.

“求婚”？有嫌发挥，因此"爱妻”，“我妻”都有一些 stretch. it is nothing but "live with me". “be my love", but not be my wife.

just for a 野合?  

方老师没有把 love 和 marriage 的区别搞清楚，因此常抱怨。
作者: fanghuzhai     时间: 2015-3-29 18:08
改成“跟我开房做性伴”，如何？呵呵。
作者: 忍忍     时间: 2015-3-30 08:53
哎，从一个极端走向另一个极端？

方老师忘了骆宾王那句：

我愿做只小羊，留在你身旁......



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