标题: [原创] 学写14行诗“最真的梦” A Very Real Dream (Sonnet) [打印本页] 作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-9-6 22:41 标题: [原创] 学写14行诗“最真的梦” A Very Real Dream (Sonnet)
A Very Real Dream
Singing in my room with the window closed
I wish to have a setting of silence
Following the lovely song I just chose
I hope to do a fantastic performance
It feels like a singer with thousands of fans
Who scream my name at the top of their lungs
Waving at me with glow sticks on their hands
They make me look like one of those top guns
Suddenly, my laptop screen goes black out
Without giving me a bit of warning
It must be the battery, with no doubt
I stop singing, something there is shining
On the window, there is a sunlight beam
Oh, what I went through is only a dream!
http://www.writingforums.com/threads/148632-A-Very-Real-Dream-(Sonnet)?highlight=sonnet作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-6 23:44 Woohoo, what an amazing sonnet you have composed! Perdie Humdinger!作者: 小草 时间: 2016-9-7 02:38 Ok, it might be your typo, you can't have my the best ...blah...blah..right? 作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-9-7 06:08 thank you Little Grass. fantastic now.作者: Xiaoman 时间: 2016-9-7 12:03
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Originally posted by 小草 at 2016-9-7 02:38:
Ok, it might be your typo, you can't have my the best ...blah...blah..right?
