昨天翻检车库，找出来十年前的文稿。发现我居然翻译了很多自己的诗，结果文档都不见了。只有一份打印的。更可笑的是，我后来又试图翻译自己。结果有两种译文。


高中愁

虾蟹居海底， 未知世喜忧。 逍遥多欢乐， 有谁与同愁？

Deep at the bottom of the sea
Crabs and shrimps reside
The world's sadness and pleasures
They simply brush aside
A life of fun they fully enjoy
Happily, gaily and merrily
Does anyone share their sorrow
If they ever have some trouble?

老的译文：

Living in deep sea
a crab knows nothing of worldly concerns
happy is the creature who cares little
knowing not that I want to share
its feelings and thoughts.


无题  1974，10，2

秋高应气爽， 何况在节日。 漫步家门外， 不知何所之。
有意访彼客， 恐遇话僵时。 只好回书房， 强读古唐诗。

The day should be fair in autumn
Much less to say on a holiday
Walking out of my home
I can’t find the proper way
I want to visit a friend but
I fear having nothing to say
I thus return to my house
To be burdened with Tang poetry

老的译文：

In autumn the air is fresh and gay
especially on this festival day
leaving an empty house behind
I wonder whom to find
there is a door I want to knock
yet I fear a speechless shock
going back to my home
I force myself to read a poem

好诗好译，也凑译一首，同喜。

虾蟹居海底，
未知世喜忧。
逍遥多欢乐，
有谁与同愁？

Living at th’ bottom of the sea,   
Shrimps and crabs know no worldly glee.  
What a carefree life of their own?  
No one cares if they’re sorrow free.

好诗，好译！ 同愁：

My Try：

虾蟹居海底，
相互少唠嗑。
共同有一愁：  
被抓去请客。
At the bottom of the sea living
shrimps and crabs that seldom talk to each other.
But both of them worry about one thing:   
Being caught and a treat for visitors.

http://www.yidian.org/articlelist.php?tid=2363&starttime=0&endtime=0

最近在这里自己翻译自己。不另外展示了，以免重复。

多谢方教授，内容不少。 我收藏先，再慢慢研究。