如何写Funny Poem? 我认为不应该是把押韵的字都放在句子后就成了。应该是有点情节和上下有联系,有逻辑, 要不就成了无厘头的凑字。 以下是我自己写的一首。我不认为我自己写得很好,很Funny。Funny,首先是作者是写来自娱,至于读者是否认为好玩,那是作者控制不了的。
It was three o'clock in the afternoon.
Josh said, "We'd better finish our work soon,
Or our supervisor will bang, zoom, straight to the moon.“
And he added, "When sneaking food, don't use a spoon,
When taking out garbage, be careful of raccoon."
I said, " Even if you give me money I still won't taste a macaroon,
It is as hard as a piece of dog bone"
At four o'clock I went home driving my saloon,
And now I am writing my poem while watching a cartoon.
快下午三点了
乔希说,我们最好快点儿完成工作
要不我们的主管会生气,拍桌子了
然后他加一句:偷吃食物时,别用勺子哈
当扔垃圾时候,小心浣熊
我说就算你给钱我,我也不吃那个杏仁饼
硬得像狗的骨头一样
四点了,我开着自己的大轿车回家
现在我一边看卡通片一边写下这首诗
(一韵到底。 去年我在一家加油站打Part-time工,做三文治,杏仁饼等各种食物。主管不在时我们是允许偷吃一些食物的。当然我很少这样干的,主要是那些东西不好吃。 如果是龙虾,可以考虑。有时那个John偷吃忘了擦嘴。这一首,是看了别人的Funny Poem后顺便写下。)
唱歌练习国语:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RY7IlYsQilY