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晨思

#1  [原创]Silence within

Out of the mysterious source,
The universe is set in motion,  
It moves forward in a calmly fashion.

Within the silence, there lies the hidden power.
Within the silence of solar system, a blue Earth comes into sight.
Within the silence of water, ocean waves emerge,
Within the silence of dust, mountains erects.
Out of the deep jungle, man standing up embracing a new world.  
in the secret realm of the human mind, a spirit of longing and devotion arises.

A desire of creation is fulfilled,
An artist has been focusing on the painting,
with no concept of time.
order and harmony swirl out of chaos,  
the truth was concealed.
A few billion years passes by.

Unexplained,
the light came out of the darkness,
And a dream was made full of color.


2009-1-9 14:40
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晨思

#2  

我不会写诗,随意乱写。


2009-1-9 14:41
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周宇


#3  



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Originally posted by 晨思 at 2009-1-9 07:41 PM:
我不会写诗,随意乱写。

真巧,俺也不会读诗,随意乱读。


2009-1-9 14:53
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悟空

#4  

Nice poem. But obviously you have romanticized the evolution of the universe, as well as the history of the earth. The road planet earth has traveled to date is actually far less romantic, far less rosy. In fact, it is a journey full of violence and dominated by deadly forces.

Here is an excerpt taken from a famous documentary:

"Planet Earth is unique. An immense ball of rock 25,000 miles around, it is a refuge. One third land, two thirds water, and with an atmosphere rich in oxygen, it is the only known home in the universe for living creatures. But this blue green oasis has not always been so welcome. The planet bears the scars of a traumatic past. A past of extreme environments and extreme catastrophes. Over the course of nearly five billion years, it has been a changing world. A world of fire, a world of ice, one of raging seas and poisoned skies. The life forms that now cling to its surface are the lucky survivors of a succession of deadly mass extinctions. "

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Originally posted by 晨思 at 2009-1-9 07:40 PM:
Out of the mysterious source,
The universe is set in motion,  
It moves forward in a calmly fashion.

Within the silence, there lies the hidden power.
Within the silence of solar system, a bl..



2009-1-9 15:54
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晨思

#5  

happy new year , Wukong.  

I know many scientists hold the depressing view of the universe, and it will for sure doom one day. but...

"A triviality is a statement whose opposite is false. However,
a great truth is a statement whose opposite may well be another great truth." -Niels Bohr



2009-1-9 16:19
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晨思

#6  

i de-romanticized it a bit, changed to " Swirling in harmony and chaos " instead of 'in harmony'.
Looking forward the evolution looks like chaos, looking backward it is in harmony   Both sounds right, depending which angle you are looking at.


2009-1-10 13:43
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