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xzhao2

#1  一条红烧/一条白炖

那个秋夜


那个秋夜
烛光是我脸上的哀伤

晚风轻轻——从西窗外溜进来
烛影摇红       
晃来晃去       
晃出了我心头的哀伤

雨下个不停
信怎么去寄
想问一声——你会等我吗
互联网——再一次连不上

那个秋夜
烛光是我心头的哀伤



那个秋夜


那个秋夜
池塘边的身影

遥远的回响
心房的撞击
那支红烛        流尽了最后一滴泪
已然熄灭

停了电        又闷又热
打开窗户
这不是那扇西窗
窗外也没有池塘

那个秋夜        只剩下记忆
池塘边的身影



是非是我非我
2006-7-8 16:21
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兰若

#2  

一鱼两吃吃的好啊,你取哀伤的伤,我取伤口的伤。。。


2006-7-8 17:58
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xzhao2

#3  

So, we didn't steal your poem.

BTW, that's our speciality and strong suit.

When my LG and me do some research/write/review/prepare/papers, we often found something......


2006-7-10 11:34
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兰若

#4  

hehe, you are a little bit sensitive....


2006-7-10 15:51
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xzhao2

#5  

Just for legel issue and safe.

Otherwise, for fun.

Hope you never mind.

In fact, I was told I look-liked stole someone's poem; but it's not true.

Actually, I pointed her some weakness and did big changes, which were more then 伤~哀伤.


2006-7-10 19:11
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兰若

#6  

In fact, I was told I look-liked stole someone's poem;

who told you that? if you thought it was me, you misunderstood what I had said. I just wanted to give you some positive comments, that's all, plz take it easy....


2006-7-10 19:15
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兰若

#7  

By the way, if I want to say something, I will say it frankly. In this case, if I thought you were stealing my poem, I would point it out immediately, if I said some good words, they were just good words, no subtle meaning hidden there.


2006-7-10 19:38
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