#5
被老师修改过的【如梦令】
微風輕浪拍堤 。
煙波翠泛雲低 。
良木鳥閑息 ,
落潮退見稀泥。
神為 。 神為 。
鬼斧匠藝之謎 。
The dam is blown and hit by soft breezes and waves,
While bigger waves and clouds linger in distance.
Idle birds rest in a good tree,
Mud is seen when the lake water flows back to the sea.
That is done by a deity. That is done by a deity.
The craftsman from the heaven, the mystery.
Rhyming scheme: AABBCC
August 14, 2015
平平平仄仄平 (韻) . 平平仄仄平平 (韻) .平仄仄平仄 (句) , 仄平仄仄平平 (韻) .
微風輕浪拍堤 o 煙波翠泛雲低 o 良木鳥閑息 , 落潮退見稀泥 o
平平 (韻) o 平平 (韻) o 仄仄仄仄平平 (韻) o
神為 o 神為 o 鬼斧匠藝之謎 o
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