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[原创] 学写14行诗“最真的梦” A Very Real Dream (Sonnet)
A Very Real Dream

Singing in my room with the window closed
I wish to have a setting of silence
Following the lovely song I just chose
I hope  to do a fantastic  performance


It feels like a singer with thousands of fans
Who scream my name at the top of their lungs
Waving at me with glow sticks on their hands
They make me look like one of those top guns



Suddenly, my laptop screen goes black out
Without giving me a bit of warning
It must be the battery, with no doubt
I stop singing, something there is shining

On the window, there is a sunlight beam
Oh, what I went through is only a dream!


我的窗口关着,我在唱歌
希望不会打扰了邻人
跟着我选好的我喜欢的歌曲,
我希望自己能唱得好

自己就恍如一名歌手
有着万千粉丝对我尽情欢呼,喝彩
对我挥舞手中的荧光棒
他们的捧场让我感觉自己就是大腕

突然间,我的电脑一片黑暗
哎呀,一点警示都没有
肯定是电池又没电了,不容置疑
我停下来,看见有东西在闪亮

在窗台上,那是太阳的光线哪
哦,刚刚经历的只不过是一场梦

By Xiaoman

June 24, 2014

http://www.writingforums.com/thr ... t)?highlight=sonnet

4 评论

Woohoo, what an amazing sonnet you have composed! Perdie Humdinger!

小草  [评] 2016-9-6 23:44

Ok, it might be your typo, you can't have my the best ...blah...blah..right?

小草  [评] 2016-9-7 02:38

thank you Little Grass. fantastic now.

Xiaoman  [评] 2016-9-7 06:08



引用:
Originally posted by 小草 at 2016-9-7 02:38:
Ok, it might be your typo, you can't have my the best ...blah...blah..right?

Please feel free to correct me, thanks.

Xiaoman  [评] 2016-9-7 12:03

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